feels like everything is changed, not like i dint want to .
The sun is shinning bright and the sea is going high.
The breeze makes me feel that i am back home again.
I don't want to leave you this time,coz its been a while,
and yes i want to be with you right now.
it feels like you had held me all this while,
though i have been miles away from you.
Its the touch of your love that takes me through all this,
and sways away all the pain in me.
you had turned down the storms for me,
you have made me stronger by this day.
i wish i could do something for you.
nice :) well put into words, some feelings r just divine and one of them is the love of a mother! keep writing :)
ReplyDeletemy good god! how did you wryt all this man!
ReplyDeletenever thot u r capable f all dis.....gud job!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteheyyy its really nice :D !... good work !... u cud add more to it and make the ending divine and speachless types but i like it!!... keep it up !... :D !
ReplyDeleteOh i love it!! In certain areas you try to say that life is not a bed of roses... But there are lines that say that things also go the right way!!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant stuff boy... Proud of uu... :D
<3 Matta!
nice :) like the way u ve tried to put ur point across... simple and well worded :)
ReplyDeletewow....!! amazing...! didnt know u had this talent... keep it up bro... great work...! :)
ReplyDeletemotu i read it thrice !! its awesome. n soo touchin... :)
ReplyDeletesweet! :) u spoke ur heart out! keep iu the good work!:))
ReplyDeleteits got soul man!!.........brilliant wrk!!! :) never thought something lyk this could come from u............keep writing bro, eager to read ur next one!
ReplyDeletespelling errors!
ReplyDeleteits really nice.
ReplyDeletegreat job.
looking forward to more.
keep it up!
only thing i cn say .. i cant belive u cn write... and write ALL ths!!??
ReplyDeleteliked this... u could expand it a bit u know
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